Oh Ryan ! Home › Forums › Critiques › Oh Ryan ! This topic has 2 replies, 3 voices, and was last updated 9 years ago by Michael Nickolas. Viewing 3 posts - 1 through 3 (of 3 total) Author Posts March 21, 2015 at 2:28 pm #20974 Reply tawmyParticipant Hey All, I am tawmy, and a newbie here. Here is a composition of mine that might be characterized as dramatic soundscape. Please let me know what you think, and how I might improve. thanX tawmy March 28, 2015 at 2:23 pm #21223 Reply Art MunsonKeymaster Bump March 30, 2015 at 8:22 am #21236 Reply Michael NickolasParticipant Hello tawmy, I like the mix, especially the use of the stereo field. The vocal gets a bit tiresome for me. I’d like to hear it drop out for longer sections to let the piece breath for a bit. Author Posts Viewing 3 posts - 1 through 3 (of 3 total) Reply To: Oh Ryan ! Your information: Name (required): Mail (will not be published) (required): Website: Your Website: Submit