Your music is very good, stay clear of long intros like in Splinter IMO.
However here is the cruncher, no matter how good your music is or how I like to or not, the real question is how licensable is it?
There is certainly a market for this type of music I don’t think the RF model would be best suited. An exclusive library perhaps and even better if you had an album of similar material with edits etc might get you in the door.