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    Turk
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    Hello, Guys

    Please check out my track Mother Earth. I had some fun making this one.I don’t know the genre, I believe it could be ethnic and chill. Let me know guys

    Cheers

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    Barbie
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    Turk, way super cool track — I’m thinking maybe “World Fusion” but not sure??
    Cheers,
    Barbie

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    BEATSLINGER
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    Thanks for sharing, it has a cool vibe. Reminds a bit of “Enya”

    I do have a question for you though. No offense, but those “triplet snare fills” don’t break up the flow of the groove to you?

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    Michael Nickolas
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    Agree, nice track and I heard the snare fill thing also. And I think the horn stab sound could be more realistic.

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    MichaelL
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    I totally agree with BEATSLINGER regarding the triplet snare fills. It breaks up the flow. The triplet is too mechanical. Maybe try a different figure and a more organic sound.

    I also agree with Michael on the horn stabs. They’re too precise and sound fake. If the notes are quantized, try to randomize and humanize a bit. Try voicing the chord with different instrument combinations, like trumpet and sax or trumpet, sax, and trombone. Also, everything else has a sort of dreamy wash but the horn stabs stick out. Try adding a cool delay and some more reverb. Just from an arranging perspective, the brass play the same chord 24 times without variation. That’s a lot. Try adding notes to the chords, passing chords and altering the rhythm.

    As far as genre goes, it’s a Contemporary Instrumental/New Age /World Fusion mix, the kind of track that the might be licensed by Nat Geo or The travel Channel and for documentaries or corporate projects with global content.

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