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  • #27452
    mannydvs
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    I would like to post my music here before I send it off. Please tell me what you think I would greatly appreciate it.

    https://soundcloud.com/theycallmedavis-1/strum-shine

    https://soundcloud.com/theycallmedavis-1/playtime

    https://soundcloud.com/theycallmedavis-1/busywork

    #27455
    PeteJ
    Participant

    I’m not qualified to comment on these as sync tracks as opposed to just music, but I like Busywork as a backing track. I wonder if you’d be up for sending me this track and letting me put some latin guitars on it. I could have some fun with it and you might get another version to submit. Just an informal thing to see how it comes out.

    #27456
    Michael Nickolas
    Participant

    I would suggest they sound too “MIDI”, both in feel and sounds. Branching out into using more live musicians or even loops recorded live will be helpful.

    #27457
    Paolo
    Guest

    hey @mannydvs,

    Please tell me what you think..

    the three things you may want to look at for the biggest improvements:
    1) tighten-up the rhythms (quantize)
    2) replace the horns with higher quality samples (or live horn players 🙂
    3) hopefully you play an instrument- perform live on top of your tracks to add realism.

    good luck!

    #27460
    mannydvs
    Participant

    Thank you all for your advice. I really appreciate it

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