Please listen to this song I wrote called “Don’t Give Up On Your Dreams”.

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  • #46808
    JoshSwag
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    Here is a link to the song:

    #46889
    MaxPower
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    Hey Josh – the idea is good – the message is universal and the chord sequence is pretty strong. I think this song would be improved by having a good vocalist sing the lyrics as an actual melody rather than the semi-rap vocal (I assume that that’s you on vocals?)
    It’s a very positive message you’re putting out there which is a cool thing to do.

    #46893
    YochananOfficial
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    Sounds good good messege

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