[sohncompositions]

David, it’s a nice piece and production value is good. I like your use of instrumentation, it’s very impressionistic.

With that being said, my only suggestion is that the piece cam be a little more dynamic. For example, around 1:06-1:08 where it pauses, I would put a crescendo on all of the instruments with a bit of vibrato on the strings. Also, towards the end when it builds, the drums can be more prominent busy, but that’s just me… if you’re going for a more sparse, different from conventional drum beat, then that’s up to you but it seemed lacking somewhere in the ending/buildup.

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