Hi Raman, I like your cue. It’s a pleasure to hear some real emotion in a piece of library music (you can’t go wrong tuning down the sixth string to a low D). I was just listening to some recent releases from a big library and was thinking how it all sounds the same, sounds written only to sell. On the other hand, my sentimental/emotional pieces aren’t big sellers. Clients seem to love their uptemo, feelgood inspirational tracks.

You have some noise in your recording, probably pre-amp hiss from your input device. Something to look into.

I intentionally placed that pseudo-gramophone sound effect there

I remember once in one of my educational songwriting projects for children I used a kazoo. I thought it was a great idea for a song for kids. The client asked me to remove “that buzzy sounding thing”. 🙂