Feedback on music

[Jenna Johns]

I was interested in getting feedback on a recent track/song I completed. I have about 30 songs, many in this sort of ‘chill out ambient lounge music’ genre?? , just curious about the whole writing for libraries thing, This style comes natural to me, also have some other style stuff, but just wanted to get feedback and wondering if there is a place for this style kind of stuff in the library world. Any advice would be helpful. I hope to learn and improve by recording these 30 songs, keep fine-tuning… I will link the sound cloud page Thank you so much for your time.

https://soundcloud.com/jennajohns1

[Jenna Johns]

p.s. the track I am looking for feedback is the top one ‘Written in the Stars Mix C’ thx

[Happy Ears]

I’de tune the vocals and edit the timing of them as they or out of time at several spots. Possibly make them more electronic sounding with a vocoder or something. The instrumental track sounds nice but I’m right now listening though laptop speakers so can’t really comment on the mix.
BTW here is a company that provides “pro” feedback on music. http://www.audiokite.com
CHeers!

[Happy Ears]

ALso BTW library music are usally instrumental so always make sure to make instrumental mixes too. The music made me feel very zen but vocals need a bit more work.

[Jenna Johns]

Thanks for your feedback Happy Ears. I will work on tweaking the vocal. Maybe put auto-tune on the track, or in individual spots. Maybe for the timing I will re-record the vocal, or try chopping it up a little and sliding stuff around. I appreciate your feedback, thanks again! : )

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