Thank you all for the feedback! OK now i can see it…you are right,the strings at the beginning are harsh and not good…sometimes when i spend a lot of time with a song i get familiar with the sound of it and i can’t detect what is right or wrong in the the mix.(i guess it can happen to everybody)
So i will rework the beginning as you advised!
If my average writing and production is like this, where do you think i could start? RF stock libraries,non exclusive retitling libraries,typical exclusives,high tier buy out exclusives?